The Wave
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Standing still, I wait here
For a wave to wash over me
Expecting to be pulled under
And swept beneath the sea
From ashore I hear the seashells
Whispering my name
Hand on my brow to shade the sun
I seek clouds full of rain
Rays of warmth caress me
A slight breeze across my skin
I expect thunder and lightning to crash
When will the storm begin
No tears of God have fallen
No high tide, no wind, no rain
Although the sea is capable
I've been given sunlit days again
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Nicely done, very soothing, i like it. Good imagery. Keep writing! Thank you for sharing.
wavegirl22-You're awesome sweetie, thank you so much! My life is fulfilled just knowing one person can put a smile on, when otherwise they may not have, if even only for a moment. I wish you the best and you can write me anytime if you need a shoulder:) Hugs
MissJamie- I came and read your Hubs on Narcissism .. though my situation is different as I am the daughter of one . . and I have a daughter that I may have passed some of it on to . . Yes, yes I have Hubs to come . .I am just trying to get the strength to hit "submit" . . and then I came upon "The Wave" and it is beautiful and inspiring and so many other things .. and may just be what I am needing today to do what I need to do . THANKYOU!
Charia--Thank you sweetie. You're right, things are going better for me, thank you so much. I wish you the best as well:) Hugs
It seems like everything is going well with you, that's good. I can sense it in your poem. Very nice by the way, I like it! Very positive! =)
Jill--Thank you hon, so glad you liked it:) I love your username, that's cute. hugs
This is beautiful, missjamied! I like it.
I always hope you have something good to say about my poems. I know I don't always write Poe quality, but I'm so happy that you liked it. Love ya. Hugs
I like it! The word picture "I seek clouds full of rain," is very cool. And a really awesome picture too. I love poems about anticipation. They're just fun to read. Thanks for sharing!
This is truly lovely!! : )
Beautiful.....restless and then soothing in the end. thank you! :)
myself 19 months ago
Jamie, I stumbled into this web site looking for your sister's address. Lo and Behold! Your poem "The Wave" -- it is BEAUTIFUL, sensitive, and sweet. I hope all is well with you now -- I feel terrible learning how difficult your life was for you for a long time. I wish I could have helped. But you did it! Love, Your Aunt Karen. I'm not sure I can comment without signing up, but here goes . . .